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Spear of Destiny by Paul McDermott  #AHAgrp  #MFRWauthor

3/15/2018

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Welcome to my blog today. My guest is Paul McDermott, with his book, Spear of Destiny. He shares with us a little humorous event that he eventually wrote into one of his books. Since I'm Irish, and my mother came from Ireland. I have to admit this tale did bring a smile to my face!
​One summer in my misspent ‘yoof’ I spent travelling the back lanes and byways of rural  Ireland with friends. We were without doubt a perfect model for the  “long-haired friends of Jesus in a clapped out microbus”  made popular in a song which was in the charts that summer (“Convoy” by B.W. McColl) Collectively we were a reasonably successful traditional folk group based in Liverpool.
Throughout June & July every village in Ireland has a music festival. As soon as people noticed the guitars in our luggage we were welcomed with open arms and rarely managed to pay for a drink ...
Pub licencing hours at the time were less ‘generous’ than they are today, and especially in England [‘Last Orders’ and closing time was 10.30 p.m.] One night early in our unplanned mini-tour, with the time approaching midnight, our Gallant Leader asked the Publican “When do you close?”
Mine Host solemnly looked at his wristwatch and replied: “September.”
With slight embellishments, this incident become a scene in an early chapter of one of my novels set in Ireland.

​LOL, that's the kind of answer I like!  Thanks for sharing.  Now tell us a little about Spear of Destiny.

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In 1945, U-boat Kapitän Herbert Nollau must deliver a weapon which will turn the war in Germany’s favour. His orders are delivered verbally. There will be no written records... and no witnesses.
Alone, far from home, hunted by the Danish Resistance and the might of the Allied Forces, he must obey either his final Orders…or the inner voice of his conscience.
 
Excerpt:
Überlojtnant Herbert Nollau stood with his Zeiss nightglasses glued to his eyes, impervious to the rain whipped across his cheeks by half a gale. This howled almost exactly at ninety degrees to the tide, which had just reached the full but had not yet begun its retreat. His command craft, U-534, sat uneasily at anchor, dipping at bow and stern in the current, yawing appreciably as frequent Force Ten gusts buffeted her broad flanks. Low, heavy rainclouds hunkered closer, seeming to settle on the upper branches of the natural pine forest which spread untamed, unculled, across the low hills of Schleswig-Holstein.
An identical pair of black Opel staff cars bracketed a canvas bodied Mercedes half-track transport wagon, all three vehicles picking their way carefully along an unmarked country road. The headlights were taped down to the size and shape of a feral cat's vertical slits, acknowledging the strict rules governing all traffic during the hours of darkness. The road to the harbour just outside Lübeck was neither tarmac’ed nor enhanced with any form of lighting. The drivers were obliged to steer cautiously around every twist, using the gears and brakes more frequently than the accelerator.
"Amateurs!" he thought to himself, as the three sets of headlights crawled slowly closer.
He blanked the thought as soon as it intruded on his consciousness, forcing himself back into State-approved Wehrmacht thinking, based on purely practical matters directly related to carrying out current instructions, with maximum efficiency, without question. He pulled the collar of his oilskins closer around his throat in a futile attempt to prevent the rain from seeping through, soaking his uniform. Raising his night glasses once more, he cursed the weather, the Wehrmacht and the world in general, feeling more exposed and vulnerable with every minute that passed as he waited for the convoy of lights to crawl closer, carrying the equipment which he had been ordered to collect. It bothered him that he was expected to set sail immediately, and await orders concerning his destination by radio once he had cleared the bay and entered Store Bælt: technically, that section of the North Sea was neutral Danish waters, and if he were to remain on the surface for any length of time in order to receive orders …
As the lights snaked around another pair of curves and began their final descent to the shoreline and the jetty where U534 was waiting, Herbert Nollau realized that he had on board a much more powerful sender/receiver than any other U-boat: in fact, not just one but two radios equipped with the Enigma cryptographic programme had been installed, ostensibly for testing. With a sudden jolt, the deceptively young-looking Überlojtnant realized that this technology was far more sophisticated than that which had previously been regarded as the best in the world: apart from being guaranteed unbreakable as a code, it could also send and receive radio signals without his craft needing to surface.
He shook his head to clear the worst of the pools which had formed in the upturned brim of his sou’wester and made his way down the ladder bolted to the side of the conning tower, aiming to be waiting on the quay before the three vehicles wheezed to a halt. His mechanic’s ear analysed and diagnosed a list of faults he could clearly identify from the laboured chugging of each engine. Furious at this indication of inefficiency, a corner of his mind decided that he would have had the senior officer responsible for each vehicle court-martialled, if the decision had been up to him. In spite of the horrors he had witnessed in three years of naval warfare, he shuddered. His orders, distasteful though they might be, were crystal clear …
Two gaunt, silent shadows slid with simultaneous choreography from the rear seat of each of the Opels: their sleek black trenchcoats almost touched the planks of the jetty, glistening in the starlight as if the officers wearing them had been marching for hours in the rain rather than just stepping out of a warm, dry car. Nollau fired off his most formal salute: the four SS-officers responded with a world-weary, bent-elbow half-salute and pointedly refrained from returning Nollau’s “Heil, Hitler!” One detached himself for a moment and gave a hand-signal to the driver of the canvas-sided truck.  The driver immediately hammered his fist twice on the bulkhead behind his seat. Four soldiers appeared over the tailgate of the wagon and began to manoeuvre something long and heavy out of the cargo space.
Turning to face his command meant that Herbert Nollau had to turn his back on the four staff officers. Somehow he managed to do this with an insolence which stated quite clearly that, as far as he was concerned, they were barely worthy of his contempt.
He placed a small, shrill whistle to his lips and blew, one long (but not overloud) blast. Within ten seconds, the deck was populated by about twenty matelots, standing at ease, who somehow contrived to arrive from nowhere and in total silence. Close to the bows, and just for’ard of ’midships , cables were deployed from two small jib cranes. Within seconds, the submariner crew were on the jetty, taking the unidentified cargo from the shoulders of the four soldiers and hoisting it with ease onto the foredeck, thence by some lightningfast legerdemain out of sight below decks. The crew had followed, leaving Überlojtnant Nollau as the only member of the Senior Service still on the jetty. At a silent gesture from one of the anonymous black trenchcoats the four soldiers climbed back over the tailgate, into the truck. After about four attempts, the driver managed to coax the engine into life and began to back and fill, facing back the way he had come.
As he completed the manoeuvre and gunned the engine to set off up the hill, the four SS officers opened their trenchcoats to reveal the muzzles of rapid fire MP40 machine pistols. With one accord they raised their weapons and sent round after deadly round of ammunition into both the cab and the rear of the vehicle, holding the triggers steady. Before the hail of bullets ceased, the fuel tanks of the wagon exploded, sending flames soaring high into the night sky, setting small fires in the tree tops as they lost their intensity and curled back towards the ground.
Suddenly, Herbert Nollau’s orders seemed fractionally less dishonourable.
Having emptied their weapons, the four executioners appeared to have rediscovered some of their habitual swagger and pride. Crashing the butts of the now-empty weapons against the rough wooden planking of the jetty they raised their right arms to the fullest, and screamed: “Heil, Hitler!” as their heels crashed together in perfect unison.
            Sick to his stomach at the pleasure his countrymen took from the callous murder of fellow Germans, it was all Herbert Nollau could do to raise his arm, bent-elbowed, in the less formal salute he would never under normal circumstances have accepted from others nor used himself.
 
The Spear of Destiny is available at:
Amazon: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B06ZZKRH5K/
Smashwords: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/718491
Paperback available at the Publisher’s website: http://www.classactbooks.com/component/virtuemart/historical-fiction/the-spear-of-destiny-detail?Itemid=0


I've a confession to make here. I have watched all the Nazi documentaries, trying to understand how the Germans were so taken in by Hitler that they committed these atrocities. Your story sounds like a great read, and I'll have to check this one out.  

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​Born in the Year of the Tiger, Paul’s natural curiosity combined with the deep-seated feline need to roam has meant that over the years he’s never been able to call any one place home. His wanderlust has led him from one town to another, and even from one country to another.


“I can’t remember a time when I didn’t write - my father claims to possess a story I wrote when I was six, which filled 4 standard school exercise books! What I do remember from that time was being told off for doing the Liverpool Echo crossword before he got home from work!”
While Paul was living in Denmark, he allowed himself to be persuaded to write for a purpose instead of purely for his own amusement. Perhaps it was the catalyst of breathing the same air as Hans Christian Andersen.
Find out more about Paul at:
www.paulmcdermottbooks.webs.com
www.thewriterschatroom.com  (Sundays & Wednesdays)


Thank you, Paul, for stopping by and sharing your book with us. I hope you have great success with it. 

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7 Comments
Paul McDermott link
3/15/2018 06:03:45 am

Paul McD pushing his elbow in here ...
Thanks for the opportunity to share Connie! Just to say I'll be 'lurking' online most of today if anyone has any burning quetions ... Remember we "invented " Time Zones, and Liverpool [aka Centre of the Known Universe] is FIVE HOURS ahead of New Yoick ... :)

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Pamela S Thibodeaux link
3/15/2018 07:36:02 am

Cute story Paul!
Great excerpt.
Good luck and God's blessings
PamT

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Paul McDermott
3/15/2018 05:06:58 pm

Thanks, Pam! The research I did for this novel was fascinating!

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susan coryell link
3/15/2018 01:29:29 pm

Wow! Tense prose there. I, too, am Irish (Scots-Irish) with a maiden name of McDaniel. Doesn't everyone want to claim Irish ancestry?
Best wishes for success with this one/

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Paul McDermott
3/15/2018 05:09:17 pm

Glad you liked it, Susan.

In Liverpool we say that a Scot is an Irishman who learnt how to swim ......... :)

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Alina K. Field link
3/15/2018 11:30:56 pm

That’s a gripping excerpt, and a fascinating period in history. Best of luck with the book!

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Linda Nightingale link
3/16/2018 01:58:59 pm

I enjoyed your excerpt Paul. I bet the research was very interesting indeed. All the best!

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